Strong/Weak

I honestly really enjoyed the presentation of the book with the toe headed girl. It incorporated the right elements within it to convey the confession. After receiving the confession at the end of the presentation the pictures within the book seemed to be stronger than when originally seen during the reading. They where different creatures with the toe headed girl, which signified her nontraditional and different family but a family all the same. The form in which the audience sat in a tradition circle for story time added to the idea of finding comfort in others.

So I don't want to bash on anyone but I would have to say that the presentation of the egg was perhaps one of the weakest confessions within Tuesdays class. I think that he could have gone a bit of a different route. some of the ideas given by the class would have definitely solidified the work and made it more meaningful, such as the idea of taking down peoples orders and just giving them the style of egg he preferred instead. To do that, would have stated that he use to be taken advantage of when cooking for others but he wasn't going to take it anymore. The original piece didn't have enough to it and his confession seemed simple, such ass he often had to cook for others.